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أملي الدعوة
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أتمنى لو أقدر أساعدك وخصوصا إني حاسه بمعانتك وأحيانا الرهبه من الإلقاء تخليك تنسين كل اللي حفظتيه فحاولي إنك ما تتخوفين حتى لو كان هذا اسلوب استاذتكم هونيها وتهون استاذتنا مثلها وقبل العيد ألقينا عندها صحيح انتقدتنا بس خليه يكون دافع لك لتعلم الكثير موفقه بإذن الله
أديـــم
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الله يسهل عليك ..
صححت لك المقدمة تقريباً أول 3 مقاطع, تفضلي:
Horror, damage, killing, and fear. The terrorism leaves all these scenes to remain as evidence upon the violence and the wrong way that terrorists choose.
Terrorism has occurred throughout history for different reasons. They are maybe historical, cultural, political, social, psychological, economic, or religious reasons.
?Why do some people commit terrorist acts
There are some causes of these terrorist acts. One of them is the sense of injustice which leads to the belief that violence will effectively redress it..
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هذا المقطع ما فهمته ..
إن شاء الله أقدر أكمل بعدين
صححت لك المقدمة تقريباً أول 3 مقاطع, تفضلي:
Horror, damage, killing, and fear. The terrorism leaves all these scenes to remain as evidence upon the violence and the wrong way that terrorists choose.
Terrorism has occurred throughout history for different reasons. They are maybe historical, cultural, political, social, psychological, economic, or religious reasons.
?Why do some people commit terrorist acts
There are some causes of these terrorist acts. One of them is the sense of injustice which leads to the belief that violence will effectively redress it..
,
هذا المقطع ما فهمته ..
إن شاء الله أقدر أكمل بعدين
أديـــم
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التصحيح بالبرتقالي للمقطع الي بعده:
فكرتك الرئيسية وصلت ..
بس أفكار المقالة غير مرتبة وسببت لي صعوبة في الفهم والتصحيح ..
يمكن لأنكم ما أخذتوا طريقة كتابة المقالة ..
عشان كذا حاولي ترتبين الأفكار بالعربي وترجميها بالانجليزي, وحاولي تستخدمين كلمات سهلة وبأسلوب بسيط ..
لإن الأهم هو وصول المعلومة بشكل صحيح للمتلقي.
بالتوفيق ياعزيزتي
فكرتك الرئيسية وصلت ..
بس أفكار المقالة غير مرتبة وسببت لي صعوبة في الفهم والتصحيح ..
يمكن لأنكم ما أخذتوا طريقة كتابة المقالة ..
عشان كذا حاولي ترتبين الأفكار بالعربي وترجميها بالانجليزي, وحاولي تستخدمين كلمات سهلة وبأسلوب بسيط ..
لإن الأهم هو وصول المعلومة بشكل صحيح للمتلقي.
بالتوفيق ياعزيزتي
غدي اجمل
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مرحبا عزيزتي انا عدلت لك بعض الجمل موضوعك ماشاء الله رائع وافكارك حلوة ولا تخافين من النقد فهو لايقلل من روعة العمل ولكنه يزيدك علما ولا تنسين ان افضل الكتاب طلع عليهم نقد ربي يسهل امرك
Terrorism
Horror, damage, killing and fear all those scenes are left by terrorism to remain as an evidence upon the violence and mistaken way that the terrorists had chosen.
Terrorism has occurred throughout history for a variety of reasons. Its causes can be historical, cultural, political, social, psychological, economic, or religious
Why do some people commit terrorist acts
?
sense of injustice and the belief that violence will effectively redress it
.
believe violence will usher in a better system.
The belief that violence or its threat will be effective, and usher in change. Another way of saying this is: the belief that violent means justify the ends. Many terrorists in history said sincerely that they chose violence after long deliberation, because they felt they had no choice
.
Religion is also frequently used by the terrorist as an excuse for his actions, despite the fact that all religions forbid murder, and demands that individuals love each others. The golden rule, found in each religion, is that we should treat others as we wish to be treated
.
This explanation of the causes of terrorism may be difficult to swallow. It sounds too simple, or too theoretical. However, if you look at any group that is widely understood as a terrorist group, you will find these two elements are basic to their story
.
Draconian security measures are not the answer to the problem. I think it is impossible to prevent terrorist acts from happening, if someone really wants to do it. Sure, we can always punish the perpetrators, but that is not a solution. Anyone who commits terrorist acts as a statement is trying to say something that was not listened to before. The solution lies in analyzing the cause of their act, and figuring out what the message is, searching for the source of the problem. If the source isn't tackled appropriately, eliminate one terrorist, and another will take their place. No amount of security, not even the kind found in a police state, can really curb terrorist attacks. As technology improves, as more and more freedoms of the people are attacked in the name of security, we don't see the world becoming a safer place to live in
.
Terrorism runs riot in places where there is no hope. It thrives in societies which have broken down to the point where ordinary citizens decide to take the law into their own hands. The terrorists have succeeded. They have created a climate of fear. They have imposed a huge financial burden impeding economic recovery
.
The law must reign and not the individual; thus will the world become safer.
Terrorism
Horror, damage, killing and fear all those scenes are left by terrorism to remain as an evidence upon the violence and mistaken way that the terrorists had chosen.
Terrorism has occurred throughout history for a variety of reasons. Its causes can be historical, cultural, political, social, psychological, economic, or religious
Why do some people commit terrorist acts
?
sense of injustice and the belief that violence will effectively redress it
.
believe violence will usher in a better system.
The belief that violence or its threat will be effective, and usher in change. Another way of saying this is: the belief that violent means justify the ends. Many terrorists in history said sincerely that they chose violence after long deliberation, because they felt they had no choice
.
Religion is also frequently used by the terrorist as an excuse for his actions, despite the fact that all religions forbid murder, and demands that individuals love each others. The golden rule, found in each religion, is that we should treat others as we wish to be treated
.
This explanation of the causes of terrorism may be difficult to swallow. It sounds too simple, or too theoretical. However, if you look at any group that is widely understood as a terrorist group, you will find these two elements are basic to their story
.
Draconian security measures are not the answer to the problem. I think it is impossible to prevent terrorist acts from happening, if someone really wants to do it. Sure, we can always punish the perpetrators, but that is not a solution. Anyone who commits terrorist acts as a statement is trying to say something that was not listened to before. The solution lies in analyzing the cause of their act, and figuring out what the message is, searching for the source of the problem. If the source isn't tackled appropriately, eliminate one terrorist, and another will take their place. No amount of security, not even the kind found in a police state, can really curb terrorist attacks. As technology improves, as more and more freedoms of the people are attacked in the name of security, we don't see the world becoming a safer place to live in
.
Terrorism runs riot in places where there is no hope. It thrives in societies which have broken down to the point where ordinary citizens decide to take the law into their own hands. The terrorists have succeeded. They have created a climate of fear. They have imposed a huge financial burden impeding economic recovery
.
The law must reign and not the individual; thus will the world become safer.
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غدي اجمل
ياحبي لكم والله فرحتي ماتوصف بردودكم مشكوووووورين
والله يجعل الي سويتوه بميزان حسناتكم ويفرج لكم ..
الله يسهل وييسر ***** الله .
ماراح انساكم من دعوة صادقة .. الله يجزاكم الف خير
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غدي اجمل
ياحبي لكم والله فرحتي ماتوصف بردودكم مشكوووووورين
والله يجعل الي سويتوه بميزان حسناتكم ويفرج لكم ..
الله يسهل وييسر ***** الله .
ماراح انساكم من دعوة صادقة .. الله يجزاكم الف خير
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