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أستاذة إحسان • 14 سنة

rana88 :

Thank you sister for correcting me ,My English not so good so I'm not sure if your writing is totally right or there are mistakes But I thank you should say sisters not friends over all your English is really good

Thank you sister for correcting me ,My English not so good so I'm not sure if your writing is...

Hi girls

Sorry to interfer in your post. But I like your idea so much. And I want to congratulate you, you are on the right way to improve your English Language skills. Please keep on practicing and you are going to succeed.

Your paragraph about friendship is nice indeed. I like it. and I also like your friend's comments and correction. In general it is a good work please keep it up.
I have some comments for your friend.
(1) We always use capital letter for I; for example: I consider all my friends as sisters.
(2) As in Arabic language, also in English language, it's better to use some words to speak more politely to other people; for example you could say: would you please correct me if I am mistaken. Or: Please can you correct my mistakes. Or: Would you mind correcting any mistakes if there are some.

this is just to add to your excellent writing skill.

أستاذة إحسان • 14 سنة

بنت دلع بس بسنع :

hi ranna thank you for this topic it so intersted i have small comment you can use word increase instead of double second thing loyal not loyality my answers i have two close friends i considers them as sister not freind all my activites we share it with us :26::26::26:last thing if you find any mistakes correct it

hi ranna thank you for this topic it so intersted i have small comment you can use word increase...

As I told your friend in the previous comments, It is a very nice topic and I want to congratulate you on the good idea of starting it . You have a very good writing skill and I can see that you want to improve it, cause you asked your friend to correct you. So, in addition to the comments I've written before, I would like to tell you that it's better to say:
I have two close friends. I really consider them as sisters not only friends. I share all my activities with them.
or:
We share all our activities.

Thanks for accepting my comments.

regards

طالبة coool • 14 سنة

Hello dears ..
I Miss the topic and you..

طالبة coool • 14 سنة

Thanks lamya.

rana88 • 14 سنة

Hello Coool, How are you
long time no hearing
I hope you are fine