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اهلين بالجميع وشكرا لمن بذل جهدا معنا ووفقا جميع محرراتنا هذا النوع من الاسئله لا اعرف فيه فارجو من محرراتنا حله لي وشكرا
Write a short paragraph of maximum 6 sentences about a special holiday in your culture and write about the special foods of that festival.
Make sure of that your paragraph covers the following:
1. A well-rounded content.
2. Good organization.
3. Specific, varied, and correct vocabulary.
4. Correct grammar structure. Use appositives.
5. Correct punctuation
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رفا1
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بليز يا جماعه افيدوني
رفا1
رفا1
هوه بلجراف تكتبي عن حفله عيد الاضحي مثلا وايش نعمل وايش نجهز من لبس واكل وسهر وزيارات وتجمعات واهميه حفله العيد عندنا يعني نكتب جمل بليز ضروري الخميس يوصلني
عزف الخريـــف
حبيبتي هذا مو سؤال سؤال وله اجابه محدده ,, لا هنا مطلوب منك انك تكتب مقال عن موضوع محدد بشروط معينه
يعني راح أفصل لك شوي :

Write a short paragraph of maximum 6 sentences about a special holiday in your culture and write about the special foods of that festival.
هالجمله مطلوب منك أن تكتبي برجراف قصير كحد أقصى يتكون من 6 جمل وأن تتحدثي فيه عن عيد أو احتفال خاص بحضارتك أو بلدك وتتحدثي أيضا عن الطعام المخصص لمثل هذا الاحتفال يعني مثلا عندنا عيد الأضحى غالبا ناكل فيه اللحم فهذا هو المطلوب تقريبا
وطبعا بعد كذا طالب منك أنك تتبعي هالشروط في كتابتك للبرقراف وأنك تتأكدي من أن مقالك ملم بكل هالجوانب .
نجي للشروط اللي موجوده :

1-. A well-rounded content.
إنك ما تخرجي عن موضوع المحتوى يعني تدورين حول الفكره الرئيسيه ولا تبتعدين عنها
2- . Good organization.
يكون تنظيمك للنص جيد

3-. Specific, varied, and correct vocabulary.
أفكارك تكون متنوعه ومتخصصه واستخدامك للمفردات صحيح

4- Correct grammar structure. Use appositives.
قواعدك وبنية النص تكون صحيحه يعني استخدمي الأزمنه بشكل سليم وبنية النص ضروري تكون مترابطة وصحيحة
الكلمة الاخيره ما فهمت المقصود ..؟ بس يبدو انه يقصد استخدام الجمل المثبته

5. Correct punctuation

وهنا طالب انك تستخدمي علامات الترقيم بشكل صحيح


هذا اللي عندي وأتمنى أكون أفدتك / ودعواتك لي بالتوفيق بدراستي :)
عزف الخريـــف
هذا مقال عن عيد الأضحى كنت مسيفته من زمان :/ يمكن يفيدك
بس لا تنسين الشروط المطلوبه حاولي تختصرينه لانه أطوا طبعا من ست جمل واهم شيء ادعيلي عندي امتحانات :(

Eid al-Adha
Meaning of "The Festival of Sacrifice"
What is Eid al-Adha
At the end of the Hajj (annual pilgrimage to Mecca), Muslims throughout the world celebrate the holiday of Eid al-Adha (Festival of Sacrifice). In 2007, Eid al-Adha will begin on approximately December 19th, and will last for three days.


What does Eid al-Adha commemorate?
During the Hajj, Muslims remember and commemorate the trials and triumphs of the Prophet Abraham. The Qur'an describes Abraham as follows:

"Surely Abraham was an example, obedient to Allah, by nature upright, and he was not of the polytheists. He was grateful for Our bounties. We chose him and guided him unto a right path. We gave him good in this world, and in the next he will most surely be among the righteous." (Qur'an 16:120-121)
One of Abraham's main trials was to face the command of Allah to kill his only son. Upon hearing this command, he prepared to submit to Allah's will. When he was all prepared to do it, Allah revealed to him that his "sacrifice" had already been fulfilled. He had shown that his love for his Lord superceded all others, that he would lay down his own life or the lives of those dear to him in order to submit to God.

Why do Muslims sacrifice an animal on this day?
During the celebration of Eid al-Adha, Muslims commemorate and remember Abraham's trials, by themselves slaughtering an animal such as a sheep, camel, or goat. This action is very often misunderstood by those outside the faith.

Allah has given us power over animals and allowed us to eat meat, but only if we pronounce His name at the solemn act of taking life. Muslims slaughter animals in the same way throughout the year. By saying the name of Allah at the time of slaughter, we are reminded that life is sacred.
The meat from the sacrifice of Eid al-Adha is mostly given away to others. One-third is eaten by immediate family and relatives, one-third is given away to friends, and one-third is donated to the poor. The act symbolizes our willingness to give up things that are of benefit to us or close to our hearts, in order to follow Allah's commands. It also symbolizes our willingness to give up some of our own bounties, in order to strengthen ties of friendship and help those who are in need. We recognize that all blessings come from Allah, and we should open our hearts and share with others.
It is very important to understand that the sacrifice itself, as practiced by Muslims, has nothing to do with atoning for our sins or using the blood to wash ourselves from sin. This is a misunderstanding by those of previous generations: "It is not their meat nor their blood that reaches Allah; it is your piety that reaches Him." (Qur'an 22:37)
The symbolism is in the attitude - a willingness to make sacrifices in our lives in order to stay on the Straight Path. Each of us makes small sacrifices, giving up things that are fun or important to us. A true Muslim, one who submits his or herself completely to the Lord, is willing to follow Allah's commands completely and obediently. It is this strength of heart, purity in faith, and willing obedience that our Lord desires from us.

What else do Muslims do to celebrate the holiday?
On the first morning of Eid al-Adha, Muslims around the world attend morning prayers at their local mosques. Prayers are followed by visits with family and friends, and the exchange of greetings and gifts. At some point, members of the family will visit a local farm or otherwise will make arrangements for the slaughter of an animal. The meat is distributed during the days of the holiday or shortly thereafter