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Television
Television is considered one of mass media's modern equipment. It was invented in 1925 by Jhon Bried . Television spreaded in all the world. It has many advantages and disadvantages. But I think that television has many disadvantages which are related to health and mind. But some times,television gives us some beneficial programmes
We know that television gives us beneficial programmes such as religion and news programmes. These programmes help us to increase our information. Also,these programmes are beneficial for our childern because these programmes have influence on their thoughts. So,we must choose a good programmes for our children.
On the other hand, television has disadvantages which are related to mind. In television, we are see many programmes which are not lovely to us. they cause danger for our mind. Our religion prevented us from seeing these programmes such as bad films.
Also, television has disadvantages which are related to health. We know that the most important element of our life is health. So if we sit before TV long hours, we will harm our eyes. Also, our meals will not be organized.
I think that television has beneficial programmes, but some times it is dangerous to our health and mind.


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