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** woooooow it`s a nice poem **my dear Abeer

I hope you cotinue your efforts *thanks.... see you in another poem..

ٌRoses are red
Voilite are blue
suger is sweet
and so are you

I don't know if I spelled it wrong :P
Thanks nice poem Anbar , I can't wait for the next one.:27:

this poem is about snow
i wrote it last term when the teacher asked us to write something about snow

ِ A Snow Sight
White stars are falling from the sky
And dancing in the air

The wind plays gently
To show how much he cares

The trees move their branches
They want to comb their hair

Thanks a lot everybody I will come back sooon with other poem ... wish you the best

Dear 3anbar,

I like ur poem a lot. But, I wanna edit it if u don't mind cuz there r few grammatical mistakes. In order 2 make it perfect, I think u should correct these little mistakes. Otherwise, ur poem is really wonderful:).

Here's the new version

Endless Night

It was cold ..and dark at night ..
I thought it was maybe the end of my fight ..
The memories still cling on my mind ..
and whatever I did .. it would never hide .!

The wind was blowing..taking me away..
But what can I do ..what can I say..?
When the fate says nobody can reply..
You just stay there crying lonely..!

The moon was trying just to be bright..
How could the black ever be white ..?
I thought it was maybe the endless night..
What a horrible thing if I am right.!

Be still my heart..never cry again..
Nothing in the langauge could ever explain..
What do you feel now ..how much is your pain ..?
you stay there ..and never complain..
never complain