مشاااااااان الله شوفوا كيف طلع هندي مو انجليزي !!!

سلاااااااام عليكم
مشان الله احكو لي وين الغلط أو صححوا لي ياه ..أنا كتبت 2 براجراف
و غلبت حالي كتير فيهن ..بس إنو لما حطيتهن بترجمة جوجل الله وكيلكن حسيت حالي كتبت هندي مو انجليزي
:44: مشان الله شوفوا لي شو القصة
لاني محتاجة الهن باكر ضروري
الله يسعدكن ويخلي لنا ياكن وهاد الاول:

My classmate is an energetic and dreamy person.Her name is Noura . She is from ****. She lives
with her parents and her brother .Our friendship has lasted three years as yet. Gladly in this semester, Noura stady with me in the same class. She study English learning more and to be good speaker in English . Noura pleasseds in her study . On weekend she some times goes to shopping or visit her reletives. She plans to become business woman. Noura looks for success and creation in her life.

وهاد التاني:

My classmate is kandly and cheerful person. Her name is Ghalih . She comes from ****. She lives with her family. Our friendship has lasted three years for now. Ghalih is studying English and coputer. She study Enghlish to become translator . On weekend , she often ****s on the Internet and writes in her page at Face booK. She plans to be best and gets ‏master's degree . Ghalih whishs beautiful tomorrow for all the people.

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