بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم
عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي
Do you still remember
Do you still remember that single wooden chair which we stayed together in
Do you still remember that muddy dolls which we made together
But I still remember
That you are my best friend
Who dry my tears when Iam sad
Does the fate will join us again
But whatever the fate separated us
We still two bodies for one spirit
And two friends for one mind
دانة عمان @dan_aaman
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بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي Do you still remember Do you still remember that single wooden chair which we stayed together in Do you still remember that muddy dolls which we made together But I still remember That you are my best friend Who dry my tears when Iam sad Does the fate will join us again But whatever the fate separated us We still two bodies for one spirit And two friends for one mindبسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي Do you...
Hi every body .please tell what do think about my little poem
taif
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بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي Do you still remember Do you still remember that single wooden chair which we stayed together in Do you still remember that muddy dolls which we made together But I still remember That you are my best friend Who dry my tears when Iam sad Does the fate will join us again But whatever the fate separated us We still two bodies for one spirit And two friends for one mindبسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي Do you...
that was exellent .
بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي Do you still remember Do you still remember that single wooden chair which we stayed together in Do you still remember that muddy dolls which we made together But I still remember That you are my best friend Who dry my tears when Iam sad Does the fate will join us again But whatever the fate separated us We still two bodies for one spirit And two friends for one mindبسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي Do you...
Hi taif thank you dear for your participation
بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي Do you still remember Do you still remember that single wooden chair which we stayed together in Do you still remember that muddy dolls which we made together But I still remember That you are my best friend Who dry my tears when Iam sad Does the fate will join us again But whatever the fate separated us We still two bodies for one spirit And two friends for one mindبسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عزيزاتي عضوات واحتنا . هذة خاطري لي كتبتها عن أعز صديقاتي Do you...
in general its good, but its got some gramatical mistakes! oh & they dont rhyme! rhyming is what makes a poem an actual one for theres no poem without a rhyme.
الصفحة الأخيرة
With you -------------------I see only beatiful things
with you-----------------------I feel peace and freedom deep down my heart
with you------------------------I see a thing of care and consideration
With you--------------------------- life is kind of charm and happiness