HI my sisters
I like your idea
and i will try to write a poem
its first time for me to write a poem in english
and i will be habby to hear any thing from you about my poem to know my wrong
I will finsh it then i will write it here

I Will Back

ريح الجنان .....

hiii dear ....thanks.. and i like them

Nice to meet u and keep going..

لا تحـــــــــــــزن....

hiii ... i am waiting 4 ur poem and i am sure u will do a nice work

Try to be proud with ur works..

thanks.... and nice too meet u

HI my sis....this is my poem...I know its bad but i dont know why i write only i tray....

SUNSHINE


I dont know what is the story of the sunshine

its always make me smile

its always make me think about life

its bring the happiness and hope to my heart

its urge me to considerate my self

its show me my goal and the right way for my life

its tell me that i have another day to make it better than today

its teach me interpedity ..sympathy and optimsim

maybe no one share me this feeling

but i think the SUNSHINE always will be a riddle for human


I hope you like it:29:.... and if there any wrong in grammar or spelling or in idea i hope you tell me

hiii dear...... what u did it is very nice... i like it...

keep going my sister... i think if u write a lot u will improve this

now i will try to feel as u feel with sunshine

when i see sunshine i will remmber u....

Hi poet...
It is a very nice poem. Try to improve this skill.
Good job :27:. I am waiting for other poems.


ريح الجنان