Kattie
Kattie
I saw my mobile watch bed blouse skirt pen
I saw my mobile watch bed blouse skirt pen
Excellent!
Kattie
Kattie
my husband lol the TV... cable mirror my computer the balcony ( the kitchen with all its stuff ( kitchen wares dinning table shade lamp many other things but thats enough i guess :)
my husband lol the TV... cable mirror my computer the balcony ( the kitchen with all its...
perfect Montreal girl!
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Kattie Kattie :
Good work Try to take care of the tenses that you are using. Also, in English we don't say "coooooooooooooold" we say "too cold" if you want to describe the weather is very cold I saw four walls, the ceiling, air –conditioning and we don't use it now because it is too cold, the table, TV, video tape inside the TV. Firstly, I watched a foreign program then now I am watching two men playing golf. My mother and sister passed in front of me. That's all darling!
Good work Try to take care of the tenses that you are using. Also, in English we don't say...
ممكن سؤال ليش قلنا video tape مو video

وبعد ليش قلنا iam watching مو watched لاني شفت الرجال بالتلفزيون وقاعده اتذكر

ادري اسالتي كثيره بس علشان اتفاداها بالمره اليايه ان شاء الله

راح اراجع على القواعد الحين .. يسلموووووو خيتو :26:

Kattie
Kattie
ممكن سؤال ليش قلنا video tape مو video وبعد ليش قلنا iam watching مو watched لاني شفت الرجال بالتلفزيون وقاعده اتذكر ادري اسالتي كثيره بس علشان اتفاداها بالمره اليايه ان شاء الله راح اراجع على القواعد الحين .. يسلموووووو خيتو :26:
ممكن سؤال ليش قلنا video tape مو video وبعد ليش قلنا iam watching مو watched لاني شفت الرجال...
Listen my dear, it is very good that you want to know the correction:

Firstly, you used the past tense as you said "I saw four walls"

Then you said "now"which means الان

so, you have to change the past tense to present continous because you are watching and you are still watching it now.

Regarding "Video tape": what I understood is that you are saying that you saw a video tape inside the video so it should be video tape.
mamazozo
mamazozo
I see my husband ,he is waching TV. and the sound is too loud
,my kids playing around me,
computer
dinning table
couch and love seat
coffe table
and lots of things
because
my computer in the middle of my appartment

الفكره حلوه كثير لانها تساعد على الكتابه والاحلى التصحيحات والملاحظات