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I am sorry but I think that the right tense to be used is the past because how do we know that the school still holds the event & she was talking about a specific year "When I was in high school, my school used to hold an event every single year and call it "the international bazaar"
about 70 tables are set up in the cafeteria to represent the different
countries that different students originally belong to.
the 70 tables were set up that day not today & not a habit
because next year it can be more or less
Each table contains the major cultural food this country serves, and also it contains
here again she is describing the activities they held
she is narrating what happened when she was there.
For the canadian culture, you have to reread the sentence because she wrote the american and canadian american & canadian cultures are two cultures not one "it is plural"
if you noticed carefully in the correction you ll see that in some sentences you did an alternation of tenses some verbs in the present & some in the past!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am sorry but it doesnt make sense for the reader.
.. please I invite you to explain this more if you dont mind it. thanks
about 70 tables are set up in the cafeteria to represent the different
countries that different students originally belong to.
the 70 tables were set up that day not today & not a habit
because next year it can be more or less
Each table contains the major cultural food this country serves, and also it contains
here again she is describing the activities they held
she is narrating what happened when she was there.
For the canadian culture, you have to reread the sentence because she wrote the american and canadian american & canadian cultures are two cultures not one "it is plural"
if you noticed carefully in the correction you ll see that in some sentences you did an alternation of tenses some verbs in the present & some in the past!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am sorry but it doesnt make sense for the reader.
.. please I invite you to explain this more if you dont mind it. thanks
anyway thanks for your explanation....though it was not convincing enough..
by the way, it is better not turn around the bush & you know well what I mean .
by the way, it is better not turn around the bush & you know well what I mean .
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