ام السوسو
it is a good afternoon here lol
sooooooooo nice to hear you are in a good mood!!!
I am doing great today thanks my dear for asking..
never mind for the writing because I will be after you till you
do it..lol :D
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Omzayed
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sorry for you computer, ' I wish it a quick recovery'
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ام السوسو
it is a good afternoon here lol
sooooooooo nice to hear you are in a good...
I was going to write it too but I will tell you first some mistakes
if you dont mind it!! you used the past tense but sometimes
you forgot..I know you didnt revise it & it happens to me too if I
dont reread what I wrote
So here you are my dear:)
Hello, I want to tell you about a story i read during my university years.. Its ( it is or it's) called The Lottery by Shirley Jackson.
The story is about a lottery that is held every year so its( it 's) kind of the village ritual. In the Fourth of July the whole town gathers (past tense: gathered) in the square and the event was conducted by a Mr Summers. A pile of stones (that: it sounds as if you want to say something about the pile of stone & since not, it makes the sentence vague) was gathered by the children was at the corner. Children (+were: past continuous) standing near the (their) parents. 16 years old boys coming (came) instead of their ill parent (plural: parents) and (+were) waiting nervously. Mr Summer stood and sets (set: past tense) a black wooden box , opens(opened) it and stirrs (stirred) the paper in it. He calls( called) out the family names and one by one they would come
up and take a paper from the box . After all the men took a paper they were ask (were asked) to open it all at once and the person with the black dot is (would be) the choosen family. This year it was a Mr. Bill Hutchinson family. After that they summon (summoned) the whole family member (plural all the family members) and make another draw , even their little child Dave (I think this sentence should come right after the family members; it gives its meaning, because here its function is not obvious. Next the black dot was found in his wife (wife's paper), Tessie . So she has (had) to stand in the middle and all the people take (took) from the stones and start (started) throwing it at her. This is how the story ends but the really (real) metaphor of the story is that not !!! winning a lottery is always a good thing.