ممكن ساعده في تصحيح كلامي ابي اليووووووووووم

عادي حبيبتي اذا فضيت بجي اساعدك
طيب انتي عرضك موجه لمين
لطالبات في الجامعه
ولا لثانوي ولا لمتوسط
ايش رايك تجبين صورة طفل يكون عادي مو فرحان ولا زعلان وبعدين وكان احد اعطاه ايسكريم او لعبه وصار فرحان وتقولين he is happy right now because of the ice cream

والقطعه فيها اشوية اخطاء بالgrammer بحاول اصلحها لك

I want to talk about tow .person s , their names Fatimah and sara

.they are sisters
Fatimah is happy about her life . she always wakes up early in the morning to go to school . She talks with her friends about good things . After that ,she goes to home . she studies hard for her matriles . At the night she sleeps early
But her sister sara is the opposite . she dislikes going to school . she is always absent , she likes sleeping . she does not make any thing . she dislikes her life and always sad

she sleeps sleeps sleeps
all the time without change anything about her self
طيب بدال جملتك هذه
so,we conclude about this story if you perform anything about in your life until its very hard and very tired we will feel happy (هل عادي اقول we conclude

but when you do not perform any thing and sleap all the time , you will feel sad and disappointment
and you do not do any thing abou your life

After that story we can say that happiness is in doing our duties and ****s
And complete our jobs
But in laziness you will be sad and disappointment

انتبهي من علامات الترقيم وانتبهي لقاعدة s المفرد في زمن المضارع
لانه هذه تنخذ عليك وممكن من خلالها تحكم عليك المشرفه عطول
انتبهي ياقلبي