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رغد الحياة
رغد الحياة •
Qatar eye Qatar eye :
لا يمكنك مشاهدة هذا التعليق لانتهاكه شروط الاستخدام.
ask them to bring us fast foods
لما تطلبي اكل من محل تستخدمي كلمة order يعني انكم ناويين تشتروا منهم
اما كلمتك ask غلط لأن معناها انكم تطلبوا منهم اكل بغرض السؤال والترجي!!

والباقي ممتاز بارك الله في عين قطر وسبرينق روزيز
سميّة
سميّة •
سميّة سميّة :
[]السلام عليكم ورحمة الله كيفكم بنات وكيفك رغد الحياة وعين قطر انشاء الله تمام شفتو الشطارة كيف (يعني اول وحدة تكتب الموضوع هي اشطر وحدة لكن لااحد يدري) هذا موضوعي يارغد الحياة وعين قطر وااتمنى تصحيحية يالغالية When I had eleven years old, I went with my family to a picnic and my father was insistent on my young father to make our lunch. My brother was afraid because it was the first cooking to my brother although he had nine years old. When my brother started his cooking, he started with put the meat on the pot with the oil because he was believed that is a true preparation. When I knew that I wanted to clean his error. Then what I did?.. I made it to aggravate by put the rice on it directly, then I put tomatoes and onions. Then I thought that I cleaned our error and I made a tasteful (Kabsah), but it was opposite. When the time of offering was coming, my father was a happy because the (Kabsah) was made by a young hands. When I wanted to offered it, I forger red peppers. So, I put a lot of it after the (Kabsah) became a mature. I and my brother because we were offered a good (Kabsah). But the large shock was coming when my members of family ate it. They stayed two days felt ail and pain because the large quantity of red peppers, salt and the immature (Kabsah). But now I am only in my family that make a good and tasteful (Kabsah). انتهى موضوعي واتمنى ينال اعجابكم وانا بانتظار تصححيحكم لية والله يجزاكم خير[/Q]
[]السلام عليكم ورحمة الله كيفكم بنات وكيفك رغد الحياة وعين قطر انشاء الله تمام شفتو الشطارة...
من شان خاطرك عزيزتي رغد الحياة
وانا اسفة
springroses
springroses •
تقصدين ال idiom خطا او ما سمعتي عنه قبل او ما لازم تستعمله.....

ما فهمت
رغد الحياة
رغد الحياة •
سميّة سميّة :
مشكووووووووورة رغد الحياة الموضوع رائع
مشكووووووووورة رغد الحياة الموضوع رائع
springroses
عين قطر تقصد انه حتى لو كان مثل لكن لغويا استخدامه ممكن وصحيح :)



موضوع سميــه عن الأكل

سمية عزيزني رجاء لاعاد تنسخي موضوعك اكثر من مرة انا عارفة وين مكانة ولما ابيه اطلعه على طول لان كذا الموضوع يطول وعالفاضي والصور تكثر وتبطيء التصفح ... جزاك الله خير
الموضوع الأصلي


الجمله قبل التصحيح
الجملة بعد التصحيح


بسم الله نبدا في اول جمله

When I had eleven years old, I went with my family to a picnic and my father was insistent on my young father to make our lunch.

بالنسبة للعمر ، اما انك تقولي
When I had eleven years
او تقولي
When I was eleven years old
اما بالنسبة لبقية الجمله اما انك تقولي
my father was insisting
او
my father insisted
تكملة الجمله اعتقد قصدك فيها اخوك وليس اوبك صح

When I was eleven years old, I went with my family to a picnic and my father insisted on my young brother to make our lunch.

My brother was afraid because it was the first cooking to my brother although he had nine years old.
انتِ تقولي بهالجمله انه على الرغم من انه كان عمره تسعه سنوات الا انها كانت اول طبخه له في حياته
طيب مافهمت انا هل برايك انه تسع سنوات هو عمر المفروض يكون عنده خبره في الطبخ؟؟
مدري حسيت الجمله فيها مبالغه شوي لذلك راح اعدلها واقول

My brother was nine years old, and he was afraid because it was the first time he cooks in his life time.

والجمه اللي بعدها

When my brother started his cooking, he started with put the meat on the pot with the oil because he was believed that is a true preparation.
دااايم اقولك ياسمية انه لما تحطي
ed
معناها ماتحطي
Was
الاثنين سوا ماينفع
he was believed خطأ
اما انك تقولي
he believed
او
he was believing
طيب الجمله بعد التعديل تصير
When my brother started his cooking, he started by putting the meat on the pot along with the oil because he believed that is the right preparation.



When I knew that I wanted to clean his error. Clean
معناها ينظف الافضل تستخدمي كلمة
Fix
معناها يعدل او يصحح

استخدامك لـ
That
خاطيء لأنك تبني عالمجهول الافضل انك توضحي لما عرفتي ايش
وتقولي

كلمة error
صحيحه لكن افضل لو تستخمي كلمة
Mistake

When I knew what he has done, I wanted to fix his mistake.

اللي بعدها

Then what I did?.. I made it to aggravate by put the rice on it directly, then I put tomatoes and onions.
اول شي اسلوب السؤال هذا اسلوب عربي بحت راح احذفها
(وبعدين وش سويت)
مو موجوده بالانجليزي :)

Then, I made it worse by putting the rice on it directly, after that I put tomatoes and onions.

الجمله اللي بعدها
Then I thought that I cleaned our error and I made a tasteful (Kabsah), but it was opposite.
لاحظي انك استخدمتي ذين اكثر من مرة خلينا نغير اسلوب الجمله
ونفس الشي
Clean
استخدامها غلط مثل ماقلت لك معناها ينظف

By doing that, I thought that I fixed our mistake and I made a tasteful (Kabsah), but it was the opposite of what I had expected.





الجمله اللي بعدها

When the time of offering was coming, my father was a happy because the (Kabsah) was made by a young hands.

عدلتها شوي
When the time for offering was coming, my father was happy because the (Kabsah) was made by young hands.


When I wanted to offered it, I forger red peppers. So, I put a lot of it after the (Kabsah) became a mature.
عدلتها شوي
When I wanted to offer it, I forger red peppers so, I put a lot of it after the (Kabsah) has been cooked.

I and my brother because we were offered a good (Kabsah).
هالجمله حذفتها احسها ناقصه شي

But the large shock was coming when my members of family ate it.

التعديل
But the large shock was when my family ate from it.


They stayed two days felt ail and pain because the large quantity of red peppers, salt and the immature (Kabsah).
التعديل

They became ill for two days because of the large quantity of red peppers, salt and the uncooked (Kabsah).

But now I am only in my family that make a good and tasteful (Kabsah).
التعديل
But after all these years, I have learned how to make an actual tasty (Kabsah).

بالتوفيق عيوني وياليت تقري التصحيح كويس وتراجعيها ..
springroses
springroses •
العفو qatar eye

انا ما قلت غير اللي درسته و موجود في القاموس و و حاجة انا ما قلت ان عبارتها خطا