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springroses • 20 سنة

Here is my essay, hopefully I am not too late!! :27:

, I will be pleased if you correct my mistakes!!

and pls let me know if you find that I diverted from the

subject.. thanks in advance!

In the midst of the modern daily stressful life, few are those who do not wish
to have moments of relaxation and self-evaluation. I myself can not resist the

idea of having a walk by the sea side, and why not having a wooden house in

the middle of the woods. It is so tempting to live up this dream

There, I see myself waking up at the sound of melodious birds-songs, that fill

the air with uncomparable joy and life. The sun beams sneaking through the

branches of those up standing trees, announcing the beginning of a glorious

happy day and whispering its good wishes of a lasting content. There is

nothing to worry about, when harmony and quietness fill the place to set free

my worries and troubles. It is a time to fly high and comtemplate

the beauty of the earth and the sky. At this moment, I can see that behind

all this pictured scenery a great creator. A gift full of colors, different shapes

and nice fragrances can not but tell a powerful owner of all this.

The green leaves, the blue sky, the clear water and the lively blossomed

flowers are there to witness His power and so I am.

It is a very precious moment, that makes me want time to stop. I believe

these are the moments for inspiration, and moments that give birth to fresh

and clear ideas. Such moments would be so exciting to be spent with my own

family, but it would be more tasteful if I have the chance to live it up on my

own.

omass • 20 سنة

Springroses you are welcome again. Your topic is something marvelous, once I started reading I couldn't stop

نبضة حنان • 20 سنة

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاتــــــــه..
هلا سمحتم لي بشرف الانضمام إليكن..
كنت أتابعكن منذ فترة...وبحق أنتن راااااااااائعات..

أنا توني مبتدئة...ومستواي ضعيييف بالنسبة لمستواكم..
وراح يكون عندي أخطاء كثييرة..
لكن العشم فيكم كبير..

شكرا ألف أخواتي الحبيبات..
وإن شاء الله أنا أيضا راح أكتب عن الموضوع..
مع التحيــــــة،،

رغد الحياة • 20 سنة

نبضة حنان ..
حياك الله عزيزتي منور الموضوع بمشتركه جديده ياهلا..
ولا تخافي احنا كلنا نتعلم وماعندنا احد اقل من احد كلنا سوا
وشوي شوي مع التصحيح راح تتعلمي وتطوري

سبرينق روزيز ..
موضوع تحفـــــــه ماشاء الله لي رجعه في اقرب فرصه ممكنة ..

عزيزاتي
معليش اعذروني انا ماراح انزل الموضوع الجديد للاسبوع الجاي وراح ناخذ اسبوع اجازة مرة ثانيه
أتمنى في الاسبوع الجاي تقدر غاليتنا دانه تكتب موضوعها واختنا الجديده نبضه حنان..
:( عارفه خيبت ظنكم بهالتأخير لكن بجد اني مريضه جدا ويصعب تواجدي في الوقت الحالي ..
سامحووووني رجاء.. :icon33:

springroses • 20 سنة

omass :

Springroses you are welcome again. Your topic is something marvelous, once I started reading I couldn't stop

Springroses you are welcome again. Your topic is something marvelous, once I started reading I...

Thank you dear omass!!
but I am not sure if the word marvelous is the right word that describes my essay!! I hope it was the case lol