read these words

Alsslam alakum how are you my sisters, i just wanna show you some of my writings to evaluate and see if there are any mistakes in the meanining of words or structure
and plz if u like it i hope you tell me me.
it is called
" Unconscious sensation "

That cold never gets hot until people warms it up. We are Very sad to be in lines moaning and looking for happy times. These feelings are thrown on us, to keep a way from some one to trust. We can't flow that stream of thoughts because wonder makes the conscious stops. It is perfect when love calls its admirers, and pretends to be desired. Is it really us whose heart reaches the passion and mind resist the logic? Well, no one goes by until we stand still and try. Having much tenderness will break the walls and eliminate the harshness. Brave heart will not draw from a fall. It will crash the strong forces until beyond the sun rise, and the light of glory shines.