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  1. @dan_aaman

    دانة عمان
    شكرا Qatar eye على التصحيح . omass أن شاء اليوم بالليل أو باجر الصبح بحط موضوعي عن family life
    بنات هذا موضوعي عن Family life

    Family life is how the members of one family live . The family is consist of mother , father , brother and sisters and sometimes grandfather and grandmother . There are many advantages of having brothers and sisters for example they can help each other in many things . They can also stay with each other when they are boring and sad . And i think there are no disadvantages of having them . I think that no problem if the mother work because she can help her husband carring the resposibilities of their children . Parents should be understanding and patient with their children .

    أتمنى تصحيح أخطائي
  2. @smy_3

    دانة عمان
    شكرا Qatar eye على التصحيح . omass أن شاء اليوم بالليل أو باجر الصبح بحط موضوعي عن family life
    السلام عليكم
    كيفكم يابنات


    هاذي قطعتي عن (Family life)
    The life will becomes more happy when I live with my family. My family contains of father,mother,sister and brother but I feel sadness because I lost my grandmother in the last vacation. I have a young brother but I suffer with he of how I can made he to the good deeds. He is very nice but he is very stubborn. Also, I have a young sister that she is very kind and she recive orders obedient from my stubborn brother. I can not imagen that I lost any members of my family. But I must as a good bliever and a good muslim to belive in the fate.


    انتهت قطعتي
    واطلبكم يالغاليات تصححوها لية
  3. @dan_aaman

    دانة عمان
    بنات هذا موضوعي عن Family life Family life is how the members of one family live . The family is consist of mother , father , brother and sisters and sometimes grandfather and grandmother . There are many advantages of having brothers an…
    بنات هذا موضوعي عن Family life

    Family life is how the members of one family live . The family is consist of mother , father , brother and sisters and sometimes grandfather and grandmother . There are many advantages of having brothers and sisters for example they can help each other in many things . They can also stay with each other when they are boring and sad . And i think there are no disadvantages of having them . I think that no problem if the mother work because she can help her husband carring the resposibilities of their children . Parents should be understanding and patient with their children .

    أتمنى تصحيح أخطائي

    عاد ما يصير تنسون تشيكون على قطعتي و أنا اللي كاتبة أول وحدة
  4. @smy_3

    المشاركة المقتبسة غير متاحة.

    غاليتي عين قطرية اسال الله العلي العظيم اللذي رفع السماء بلا عمد ان يرفع
    عنك الهموم والغموم وان يجعل كل حرف كتبتية في ميزان حسناتك انة ولي ذالك والقادر علية
    اعذريني يالغالية تعبتك معاي
    يالغالية مافهمت قصدك من هالكلام
    والبية بصراحة ما فهمت منه شي. مقتبس من عين قطرية
    وبالنسبة للنقطة الثانية اقصد ان اخي لطيف لكنة عنيد
    وجزاكي الله عني الف خير

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