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جملتك..
جملتي مصححه
Things I see when I take a walk
One day my British supervisor in school told me that she saw a wonderful place called wadi shaab hear in my region Al-sharqia .
One day my British supervisor in school told me that she saw a wonderful place called Wadi Shaab here in my region Al-sharqia.
I wondered and I said for her "I know every thing in my region and I don't know any place hear called wadi shaab " .
I wondered and I said to her: "I know every thing in my region and I don't know any place hear called Wadi Shaab ".
She said " come with me I will show you " . Then she took me with her to wadi shaab .
الجمله هنا جدا قصيرة الافضل تندمج سوا
She said: "come with me I will show you", then she took me with her to Wadi Shaab.
The road was very rough and high between mountains . It scared me . When we arrived to wadi shaab I thought that I was dreaming .
راح ادمج الجمل..
The road was very rough and it was high between the mountains, I was very scared but when we arrived I thought that I was dreaming!
I didn't believe what I saw. It was really the most wonderful place I have ever seen in Oman .
نفس المشكله لاحظي كم طول اول جمله ؟؟ خمس كلمات فقط! غلط انك تضعي نقطه وراها لأنها جمله قصيرة جدا ..
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I couldn't believe my eyes, it was really the most wonderful place I have ever seen in Oman.
I saw many marvelous things when I take a walk in wadi shaab .
طالما قلتي saw اذن لازم تستمري على الماضي وتقولي took
I saw many marvelous things when I took a walk in Wadi Shaab .
It collects many kinds of environments sea , valley , palms and grasses every where .
راح اغير صيغة الجمله شوي..
Wadi Shaab contains many different kinds of environments such as the sea , valley , palms and grasses every where .
There where many tourists. I really surprised when I knew that wadi shaab occur in my region
, At Wadi Shaab there were many tourists and that surpriced me very much because I didn't know that this place even existed!!
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