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قد كتبت عن العيد تعبير وصححتو ليا الدكتوره 
لكن انا كتبت عن عيد الفطر تبغيه اديك هوا لانك كاتبه بصوره عامه ؟؟ 

شوفي دا تعبير عن عيد الفطر ومختصر !! 

Muslims celebrate of some special occasions . Eid al – fitr is one of them .
In this day people great each other saying " happy Eid " . They pray in the Mosque wearing 
Their new and colorful clothes . Women prefer dresses but teen ages like pants skirts and blouses .
After that they gather in the big house of their parents to have their breakfast which consist of traditional food as Debyaza and Zalabya . 
After that they return home preparing themselves to visit their relatives where kids like to collect both money and candies . In the evening they go to the seaside or take their children to the funfairs . The 3 days of Eid Al – fitr are really unforgettable days .

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