springroses
حياكي الله يالغالية
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Hello omass,
First I want to tell you that I liked your introduction a lot & i think it is very well expressed..though,I didnt read your previous writings to compare.Anyway
I have done a slight correction which may not be satisfactory to you because I m new here but raghd & qatar eyes will tell you if there is anything else!!
The worst food I ever ate
Talking about food remind me of our Prophet Mohammed peace be upon him saying which advises Muslims not to criticize any food ;if you like it eat it or you can just leave it . Well , I've never been to different places and when it comes to our local restaurants I am not that picky .I usually have the same order at any restaurant in order not to make my stomach upset . The funniest thing (the verb is missing "is") that I am not that good at cooking and my husband is always suffering . I can remember so badly the experience I had before nine years . I was still a new wife and I hardly knew my neighbors. When an invitation came to me from our
Yemeni neigbors, I expected at once. (better say : whenever my yemeni neighbors invited me, I used to accept at once) . I was there
one time ,they were the nicest family I "have" ever "met" (present perfect) .Food was put (served sounds better when talking about serving food) on the floor , it looks (past tense : looked) delicious . The old
woman asked us with a warm smile to start eating .I sat down taking a spoon and tasting the various food in front of me , it was nice.But I was astonished when I saw the guests eating something weird greedily . Out of curiosity, I took a small nibble but it was as bad as it looked . It was disgusting , I can still have the horrible taste in my mouth . I realized that it was dried fish called Al-lakhem and it smelled so badly .May all Yemenis accept my apologize as this food isn't acceptable to me, they can feel the same about our traditional food .
You have a nice style in the narrative writing!!
keep it up
First I want to tell you that I liked your introduction a lot & i think it is very well expressed..though,I didnt read your previous writings to compare.Anyway
I have done a slight correction which may not be satisfactory to you because I m new here but raghd & qatar eyes will tell you if there is anything else!!
The worst food I ever ate
Talking about food remind me of our Prophet Mohammed peace be upon him saying which advises Muslims not to criticize any food ;if you like it eat it or you can just leave it . Well , I've never been to different places and when it comes to our local restaurants I am not that picky .I usually have the same order at any restaurant in order not to make my stomach upset . The funniest thing (the verb is missing "is") that I am not that good at cooking and my husband is always suffering . I can remember so badly the experience I had before nine years . I was still a new wife and I hardly knew my neighbors. When an invitation came to me from our
Yemeni neigbors, I expected at once. (better say : whenever my yemeni neighbors invited me, I used to accept at once) . I was there
one time ,they were the nicest family I "have" ever "met" (present perfect) .Food was put (served sounds better when talking about serving food) on the floor , it looks (past tense : looked) delicious . The old
woman asked us with a warm smile to start eating .I sat down taking a spoon and tasting the various food in front of me , it was nice.But I was astonished when I saw the guests eating something weird greedily . Out of curiosity, I took a small nibble but it was as bad as it looked . It was disgusting , I can still have the horrible taste in my mouth . I realized that it was dried fish called Al-lakhem and it smelled so badly .May all Yemenis accept my apologize as this food isn't acceptable to me, they can feel the same about our traditional food .
You have a nice style in the narrative writing!!
keep it up
springroses
حياك الله عزيزتي
يلله اتظر موضوعك معنا واذا حبيتي ممكن تبدي من الموضوع الجاي ..
الفكرة هي انه كل سبت نعطي موضوع ولازم البنات كلهم يكتبوا عن نفس الموضوع بس كل وحده وافكارها ومخيلتها ..
الموضوع مايصير يقل عن 100 كلمة
ولازم يتم تسليمه قبل السبت اللي بعده
اي احد عنده اي اضافه نرحب فيه سواء تعليق عن مشاركه او تصحيح كلمة او اسلوب كلنا نسمع لبعض ومايهم المستوى المهم انه نستفيد من بعض بشكل لبق ومحترم :)
هيدا كل شي الشغله جدا سهله باذن الله
فيكي تبدي بالموضوع السابق وهو كان عن
The worst food I ever ate
الافكار اللي ذكروها النبات جدا متفاوته ورائعه ربي يبارك فيهم .. لو عندك افكار عن هالموضوع اكتبي عنه لكن قبل السبت .. بالتوفيق يارب ..
همسه اخيرة ..
من فضلك عزيزتي انه ماتفعلي توقيعك عند المشاركه لأنه طويل ويعيق علينا التصفح ماتزعلي مني بس الصفحات الاولى اوكي مو مشكلة اما الان صار الموضوع طويل ويصعب تصفحه كل ما زاد الكلام والصور فيه :)
تسلمي يالغاليه ..
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حياك الله عزيزتي
يلله اتظر موضوعك معنا واذا حبيتي ممكن تبدي من الموضوع الجاي ..
الفكرة هي انه كل سبت نعطي موضوع ولازم البنات كلهم يكتبوا عن نفس الموضوع بس كل وحده وافكارها ومخيلتها ..
الموضوع مايصير يقل عن 100 كلمة
ولازم يتم تسليمه قبل السبت اللي بعده
اي احد عنده اي اضافه نرحب فيه سواء تعليق عن مشاركه او تصحيح كلمة او اسلوب كلنا نسمع لبعض ومايهم المستوى المهم انه نستفيد من بعض بشكل لبق ومحترم :)
هيدا كل شي الشغله جدا سهله باذن الله
فيكي تبدي بالموضوع السابق وهو كان عن
The worst food I ever ate
الافكار اللي ذكروها النبات جدا متفاوته ورائعه ربي يبارك فيهم .. لو عندك افكار عن هالموضوع اكتبي عنه لكن قبل السبت .. بالتوفيق يارب ..
همسه اخيرة ..
من فضلك عزيزتي انه ماتفعلي توقيعك عند المشاركه لأنه طويل ويعيق علينا التصفح ماتزعلي مني بس الصفحات الاولى اوكي مو مشكلة اما الان صار الموضوع طويل ويصعب تصفحه كل ما زاد الكلام والصور فيه :)
تسلمي يالغاليه ..
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الصفحة الأخيرة
most welcome dear
dear omass, I will inshallah read your text & if I noticed anything I will let you know..
:)