Qatar eye :

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سميّة :

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله كيفكم بنات وكيفك رغد الحياة وعين قطر انشاء الله تمام شفتو الشطارة كيف (يعني اول وحدة تكتب الموضوع هي اشطر وحدة لكن لااحد يدري) هذا موضوعي يارغد الحياة وااتمنى تصحيحية يالغالية When I had eleven years old, I went with my family to a picnic and my father was insistent on my young father to make our lunch. My brother was afraid because it was the first cooking to my brother although he had nine years old. When my brother started his cooking, he started with put the meat on the pot with the oil because he was believed that is a true preparation. When I knew that I wanted to clean his error. Then what I did?.. I made it to aggravate by put the rice on it directly, then I put tomatoes and onions. Then I thought that I cleaned our error and I made a tasteful (Kabsah), but it was opposite. When the time of offering was coming, my father was a happy because the (Kabsah) was made by a young hands. When I wanted to offered it, I forger red peppers. So, I put a lot of it after the (Kabsah) became a mature. I and my brother because we were offered a good (Kabsah). But the large shock was coming when my members of family ate it. They stayed two days felt ail and pain because the large quantity of red peppers, salt and the immature (Kabsah). But now I am only in my family that make a good and tasteful (Kabsah). انتهى موضوعي واتمنى ينال اعجابكم وانا بانتظار تصححيحكم لية والله يجزاكم خير

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله كيفكم بنات وكيفك رغد الحياة وعين قطر انشاء الله تمام شفتو الشطارة كيف...

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